Queen of Clubs (Free Demo)

Hmm, it's an interesting premise with promise. I was surprised to see this simple mechanic expanded into a larger game. Some feedback/ideas:

• Audio options are a must, and I also recommend not overlapping music tracks, such as the one that plays when you succeed at things. Fade out the background track to avoid interference
• Personally, I like to see a fair amount of build-up to h-scenes, particularly sex, to make them more impactful. Didn't take a lot to cream Faun princess, and I worry all it'll take is one day of a character visiting the shop to get a scene with them. It'd be nice if you gotta work for it a little with each princess, and maybe do stuff involving them outside the club :3
• I wasn't able to use the bathroom key, I assume that's just because it's not done yet. Peeking in is pretty fun, though getting the bathroom key so quickly means there's not a lot of build up of that feeling of wanting to go in with them, you can just go in after a few days.
• Maybe move the middle table down a bit? Some princesses get in the way and I click them on accident when trying to grab a drink
• Avoid too much tutorials and dialogue before players can get into the main gameplay loop, and in particular, the tutorial for how to run the bar should only be for the first time you do it, not every time.
• The list of places to go is a bit overwhelming, and I doubt there's anything to do in most of them at the start. Perhaps have locations be discovered as you play, and just show the discovered locations?
• I'd like to see bar-running mechanics expanded as you play. New things you have to manage, mini-games, having to manage people in another room, deal with rowdy guests, bandits, quests... anything to spice things up as you go. The bar running mini-game is alright, but you can't hold up a full-length game where you just do that every day, it'll get stale. Plus it doesn't seem like there's a ton of ways to expand it right now, given how demanding the guests are of your time and their short-timers to get the drinks There wouldn't be time to manage other things without them getting frustrated. Maybe some automations could free you up... But anyways, giving opportunities to grow the business, at the cost of it being more complicated to run it, presents a good difficulty curve when paired with the extortion deadlines.
• On that subject, more variety in bar upgrades or reasons to go out will help a lot. Passive buffs, more time, decorations, more seats, extra drink slots, faster refreshes, unlocking whole new systems to manage like a brothel or kitchen, etc.. Basically I'm just saying there's a lot of potential for depth, if you're looking to create a bigger experience! I also noticed that it's not too hard to get the whole bar drunk from the very start, but one may need to start the player less-strong, or make things harder as you go in some way, so there's a higher ceiling for upgrades to matter. Just getting paid more money or getting different guests isn't changing the gameplay/challenge at all. It might also be cool if getting more princesses to visit both A) provided benefits other than just them being a new girl, and B) often came with some conditions that are more interesting than just buying an item that adds them to the pool. Such as maybe hearing about a place from a princess, going to that place and getting audience with the princess, or doing a quest, etc.
• Dialog choices, even if they change nothing, can help keep long dialog scenes interesting and boost character immersion
• Not sure if it's a bug, but Dragon Princess didn't show up until day 3, even though the dialog was written in a way that implied it was day 2. It also only triggered when I transitioned back and forth from the shop area. Was a little confusing.
• Wasn't super clear what the upgrade that made drinks increase your timer did. Could use a visual effect or something.
• The screen transition where all the furniture flies off the screen is kinda weird.

Anyways, that's a lot of thoughts, but I'm looking forward to developments! I quite like management games like this, and they work well as h-games.

this game would be good if it had choices but your just a stale character with no say in anything sadly, its just porn you have to click through, just watch hentai honestly

Gimme some gay options and my money is yours!

Will this game come to Steam in Early Access? Or will it come to Steam when it is finished? Really loved the previous game on Steam.

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